Now that my character's been approved, I guess its time to start

(P.S.: I've noticed most persons have the link to their character in their signature, I did the same is that fine?, And also, is it okay if I explain what happened before he fell asleep?)
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After succesfully escaping from the "perfect land" Tralok moved as far as possible, to prevent being found on the remote occasion that the Ek'thin would actually send someone for him instead of just staying where they are to avoid facing the real world, he stayed in towns whenever he found one, proceeding to continue his trip until he found a forest or some place to hide and sleep, after three days, he decided it was just redundant to keep escaping, and returned to his normal pace; his eyes always wandering through the environments he had missed all the years he had lived as of now; true they indeed had no problems finding fruit or some farm animals within the land of the Ek'thin, yet he had never seen the chirping birds or the running deer, indeed nice animals if he was to say so himself.
After enjoying the view for an elongated period of time, Tralok decided it was time to sleep.
More than once had Tralok been woken up during a particularly nice sleep, but this was the first time his sleep had been disturbed by a god. As Tralok's eyelid's opened, he saw an extremely pale woman with with an almost white hue of blue hair, turquoise eyes and an elongated white dress with more than a few ice designs all over, A blue aura surrounding her. Tralok watched as she spoke, the voice clearly not human as a human would be unable to reproduce such sound.
"Tralok, my faithful warrior; this is the first time we've met so you may still have problems recognizing me. Yet my powers have taken you through the toughest situations, I am Ahkkaryp the goddess of ice, and I bring a mission for you to be able to see your destiny."Upon hearing her speak, Tralok spoke truthfully.
"But did you have to wake me up?, I was having a nice nap...Akkharyp laughed at the antics of the young human, then continued speaking.
"You know most people call gods with some respect, however back to the topic; a man named Atrin, practitioner of your trade; but your polar opposite in personality. You'll face this man, and depending how you fare, will decide wether youll live or die within this world"Slightly more interested, the man spoke
"Ok, ok I'll fight him"The man was thrown back into his original position near a river on the Plains of Argis, meanwhile the goddess pondered how come the man could speak so familiarly with him without evoking her rage. Tralok wasn't able to see anything coming from where he was standing, so he decided to lie down and wait in that position until the man came by, he'd probably spot him when he appeared; however Tralok only realized he had been sleeping when a red and purple figure tripped over him, The figure screamed something his ears couldn't quite understand, probably related to the fact that he shouldn't have been sleeping anywhere randomly like that.
Tralok rolled a few feet away before standing up in order to prevent being hurt if the figure (who he now identified as a clown) had a weapon. The water mage's assumption was right, as the man took a quarterstaff from his back little after he stood up, upon further inspection the man who apparently was just a little older or a little younger than him looked beyond sanity, and his clothes didn't help that much either. Tralok took Kath'yu from the hilt on his back, and held it in a diagonal position that would allow him to attack if necessary, the blade only slightly pointing at the other man. Tralok decided upon asking this man about his trade, the man could hide his name if he had wronged, but he'd have no reason to hide his trade, would he? Tralok spoke calmly, introducing himself in the proccess.
"Nice to meet you, my name is Tralok. Just wondering, but are you by any chance a mage as I am?If the man was indeed a mage, he'd probably be Atrin, as it wasn't particularly common to find one, and by the looks of t, he was indeed Tralok's polaqr opposite.
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So? How did I do?, I hope I met the expectations