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 Post subject: Déjà vu - Toshio’s training battle
PostPosted: Thu Jun 24, 2010 1:04 pm 
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-Battles are fought in turns, you post after a response.
-Fighting happens in "real time"; meaning you can, if you wish, go back in time a little to describe actions and things you do before any attack the opposition lands (within reasonability)
-Be as descriptive as you can. More information makes for better battles.
-Do not ever control your opponent's character (or pets) in any way.
-Characters are, typically, allowed two actions per post: One defensive action and one offensive action. Regardless of whether you were attacked or not, you may only attack once per post.
-You can only use 1 special/spell per turn (you can use multiple skills per turn, but only 1 special per turn). Specials that have an effect on your opponent count as your one offensive action.
-Try to be fair in both your attacks as well as your dodges. Getting hit every now and then is not the end of the world, and deepens your character. (And makes battles more interesting)
-A minimum of 2 paragraphs (though more are desirable!)
-No "unblockable" attacks. There's always something, somewhere that can happen.
-Be creative, use the world around you to your advantage!
-Use a spell checker, or a program that helps with punctuation. It can't hurt...and can generally help your posts become more readable.
-Have fun!!! Battles are supposed to be enjoyable. If you don't like it, something is wrong.


* Read your opponents character sheet it helps a lot stops confusion
*Read over your post before submitting it helps improve quality a hell of a lot.
* Enter how you like, an introduction or a straight forward sneak attack


The shadow ruin, a fitting place for the remnants of the great assassins guild to reform. The central room flooded with light casting deep shadows behind the numerous pillars circled around the large hole in the roofs centre. The ministry of silencing the foremost assassins guild in the land had betrayed Kate and not only that they had made it there new goal to kill her. A few failed attempts and forced her hand and she had come to their meeting place and shown them what a real assassin was, cold, merciless and lethal.

Kate’s retractable blade slid back into its casing dislodging itself from the fallen leaders back. She looked up calm and collected surrounded by a room of blood and death, the light seemed to be directed at her standing in the centre, the only open and exposed part of the entire dark room filled with places to hide. It was a well defended nest suitable for assassin’s a direct assault would have been suicide yet they didn’t expect her to come through the roof. In the confusing and mayhem they had all fallen.

A contract floated across the flood moved by the light breeze of the broken building. She picked it up it was clean, not touched by the blood or dirt. Her eyes narrowed she knew it was for her, the powers that worked behind the scenes had once again conspired to make her the judgment.

Assassins contract used:

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Name: Gyzen the Drow assassin.

Strengths: he is fast relying on quick bursts of speed to surprise and overwhelm many opponents.

Weaknesses: like most assassins he is fast and agile but can’t take a beating his abnormally fast blood flow gives him extra endurance but less damage threshold.

Notes: you are to test him, if he is worthy let him live.


Kate looked up, another Drow assassin? This was strange was it a racial stereotype or something? Is this the basic curriculum growing up assassination…

With that she looked around, everything was silent but an assassin was good at being sneaky. Her nerves tensed, her wrist blade away but ready to spring at any moment and her trusty blade was across her back if it came to that, it rarely did however. A bolt was slowly loaded into the side of concealed demise the wrist guard that hid both blade and bold launcher. Her pale face was splatter by the blood of her victims and despite it’s beauty only held a look of neutral calm and icy coldness. She was ready for anything…

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 Post subject: Re: Déjà vu - Toshio’s training battle
PostPosted: Thu Jun 24, 2010 8:40 pm 
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Thanks. Sorry for the long wait of my post. I think we're in very different timezones... :P
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Anxiety overwhelmed the young elf. He didn't show it, but waiting teared apart what was left of his broken heart. All he could hear was the small patting of his feet against the water. He was pacing back and forth on the pathway. Gyzen was consumed with both doubt and cockiness, and by pacing back and forth, the two feeling viciously fought. Doubtful, as would he fail, or cockiness, as in would he have no chance of losing?

He gasped. It's not going to happen anytime soon, he thought. Right when he sat down on the soft grass, there was a loud blast. Lightning struck right in front of Gyzen, an by instinct he shielded his eyes. When he removed his arm, he was standing in the middle of a ruin, looking at a woman with a paper in her hand. After a small moment of awkward silence and consistent staring, Gyzen moved his right arm to reveal a concealed dagger under his sleeve. Then he grabbed the edge and readied his stance.

"Kate Darksmith, don't expect mercy because you're my trainer. I'll fight until 1 of us drop dead, so ready yourself!" Gyzen said with his emotions locked up behind his heart where it will rot away. Cockiness definitely won, so Gyzen took out his left dagger and rushed towards her.

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 Post subject: Re: Déjà vu - Toshio’s training battle
PostPosted: Sat Jun 26, 2010 12:52 am 
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(not a bad first post, length was ok borderline being too shot just try and make sure to describe: what’s happening, yourself, emotions, the arena more, your opponent ect.

When you make your attack remember to describe what your doing and where your aiming (it’s a common mistake) just saying you try and stab her would allow me to chose where you attack is directed and you don’t want to leave yourself open.

As you can see my post has very little physical action but you can see how descriptions and thoughts can be used to bulk up posts,

I‘ll leave the first attack up to you since you’ve already ran towards me)

Before her, not even melting from a shadow but right from the air was her trainee. She raised a eyebrow trying to weigh up her opponent she was lost for words, he was younger than she expected but then again she knew too well how Elf’s of all types lived long lives and could keep youthful for many years, yet he was short, even shorter than her. He started at her with one eye as black as the night without starts or moonlight, and one so dull and dead it was clearly beyond conventional use. A nasty neat little scar seemed to be the cause a X across his eye, a strange wound that seemed forced like torture rather than caught in battle.

He broke the silence taking the initiative, it was clear he was well informed on who she was and her purpose. His words seemed full of confidence despite the numerous corpses littered around and the floor stained sanguine in colour and sticky underfoot with the mix of fresh blood.

“Gyzen, if these are the stakes then no mercy will be returned as a gesture of good will”

Still unarmed Kate wiped a streak of blood from her forehead before it dripped into her eyes, her manner was casual even as he ran towards her outwardly she was clam inside she was tense and ready to react like a loaded gun. Her hand still up as she casually moved her hair out of her eyes with her right hand up, yet on it’s wrist her ultimate assassin’s tool concealed demise was strapped firmly disguised as a sleek then armguard a one of a kind weapon of many uses.

As he came just a step from her she smiled…

(oh and yes I’m a Brit girl time zone will be way different and your not late the site operates a 3 day limit although I try to get back to trainees in 1 or 2 max when I can so if you post quick ill try and get this finished in good time too)

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